tides of love
The waves of love swept over him
to gently dim the fear he had
of pain of loss and loneliness
with ocean’s kiss and dreamy sand
He would awake inside a dream
the tide now seemed to dissipate
and standing in the pale moonlight
a brand new sight his blissful fate
Now at long last he knew it real
that two could feel what books tell of
and both learned it would never end
fear could not rend two souls in love
This poem was written using the meter/assonacne from Tolkien’s Song of Eärendil. Something about this structure gives the sense of motion and adventure to me, which feels right given that finding love and the shared life of continuously renewed commitment once it is kindled are both their own kind of journey.
Also I rewrote parts of this so many times despite it only being three stanzas and I decided to just send it before I stay up all night lol anyway I hope you enjoyed <3

The poem feels indeed live a wave, amazing lyricism💫
Listen, the poem was already insanely beautiful, but then you mentioned Tolkien and now I'm 🫠