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theinkspilled's avatar

The poem feels indeed live a wave, amazing lyricism💫

Jack's avatar

Ooh thank you 🫶

Marie Rose🌹's avatar

Listen, the poem was already insanely beautiful, but then you mentioned Tolkien and now I'm 🫠

Jack's avatar

oh my thank you 🥹

Sofy's avatar

this is amazing, really i’m in awe, it’s so beautiful 🥹✨

Jack's avatar

ohhh wow thank you that means so much

✮⋆˙₊ mj ₊˙⋆✮'s avatar

the lines take turns swelling and breaking like waves lapping the shore.

I felt so immersed reading this!

Jack's avatar

ohmygoodness thank you

emma 🐞⋆˚꩜'s avatar

I love the lyricism of this poem so much jack!! it feels like something out of a dream

Jack's avatar

ahhhh thank you eek I was trying to go for the lyricism and then the first 2 stanzas I was hoping would be a bit dreamlike too

emma 🐞⋆˚꩜'s avatar

then it definitely did what you set out to do!! love it! <3